WoLD Storytelling Challenge 1 - xRemedy

[xRemedy]

Here is a quick screen shot showing how i finished the powerlines in the back ground im trying to decide about adding another larger cable below the smaller ones on the other pronge the model has. let me know what you guys think and also the updated screen of the building is coming soon so keep an eye out!

[xRemedy]

Heres the building screens and thanks alot for the links fixed my dust problems.

[Aldighieri]

I like the detail that you put into this, good job!

[xRemedy]

Thanks! i should have some more updated screens tomorrow with more buildings and such.

[xRemedy]

Here are two more screen shot showing how the train yard part of my map is almost complete. All i need to do is find away to make a believeable back drop that doesnt look out of place with the rest of the level. Im trying to decide what look i want for the other buildings around the street, when i find what i want ill up load some refrence pictures of what i found.

[xRemedy]

Sorry for not uploading any building refrence pictures,
I really couldnt find anything I liked so I came up with my own but with the due date approching so quickly im going though now and started the fine tuneing of everything.











I dont think im going to be uploading anymore screens till the due day, however I will still wright about how things are going or if I run into any flaws or not.

[xRemedy]

Ive made some settle changes to the detail of each level such as AC units on top of some of the buildings and some foliage on street level to bring more life to the street scene. As the title says this will be my last screen shot update till the due date of the beauty shots.

[Pete_Bottomley]

cool stuff xRemedy,

Maybe adding some light in the windows of the first image on the right might draw a bit more attention to that area? Also the AC units on the building could be scaled a bit bigger so that they create more of an impact?

Also the sleepers under the rail track look abit 2D, could lift them up a bit to create some depth?

Great work though, good luck with those final beauty shots, looking forward to seeing them

[xRemedy]

-From The Bench-


-The Train Yard-


-Urban Decay-

[xRemedy]

Thanks to everyone at World Of Level Design,
It has been awsome being about of this challenge, Thanks again!

[Aldighieri]

Good luck!

[xRemedy]

Same to you man! it gonna be a crazy next 3 days.

[keithgarry]

XRemedy levels up! Congrats!

[xRemedy]

Thanks man! it means alot.

[hr0nic]

Nice screens good luck!